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工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
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如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! fCY|iO0.t
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 #/G!nN #
主 题 句原则 B"4 3o7C
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! q<09]i
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! @@Q4{o
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you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、 v`S5[{6
一 二 三原则 Igo`\JY
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… ~^F]t$rz
如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 Pp?P9s{
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗) ~
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4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, G@s:|oe
lastly(不推荐,原因:俗) :DH@zR
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐) DwBe_h .
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐) Q
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7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐) /E6)>y66
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9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) \%r#>8c8
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) ]D6<6OB
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则 |]kiH^Ap
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: LNL}R[1(
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这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则 T)tr"<F5NP
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, 9^Xndo]y
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之类的形象词。再比如: cJSNV*<
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1)加法(串联) T:j41`g%s
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 2-S}#S}2C
但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: T#E{d
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2)转折(拐弯抹角) Q8TR@0d
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 319 4]
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. .9DhD=8aIO
The coat was thin, but it was warm. JNU9RxR
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despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, Z){fie4WM
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3)因果(so, so, so) KjA7x
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The snow began to fall, so we went home. c7rC !v
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4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) BT:b&"AR[
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 _)CCD33$
举例:This is what I can do. MNfc1I_#
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. j1JdG<n
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如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 ZA4sEVHW
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6)排比(排山倒海句) ?f6Fj
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! ;S2/n$Ju_
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要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则 m!<uY?,hf
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! M-f; ,>
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: ~EhM"go
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思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! X[iQ%Y$/n
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方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; 3,-xk!W$L
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