一、 长 短 句原则 )rn*iJ.e8
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工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: v&DI`xn~
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is w0rRSD4S8B
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如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! ayR-\mZ
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 '3/4?wi
主 题 句原则 t5\-v_mG=&
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! ^}/PGG\~r
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! !/'t5~x[
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prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, LG{,c.Qj*
you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、 _{I3i:f9X8
一 二 三原则 X5zDpi|Dq
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… q;T{|5/O
如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 i1ixi\P{0
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗) oK6tTK
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗) 7Wf/$vRab
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗) XKj|f`
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, _<n~n]%
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5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐) >*~L28Fyn
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐) u@W|gLT1
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐) (5$!MUS~9
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9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) o5Dk:Bw
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
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建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则 |HiE@
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: : %lTU
I cannot bear it. Ec!"O3%!M^
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. -^&<Z
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I want it. ,Xu-@br{
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. 0.`/X6
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这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则 ~8q)^vm>f?
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, tqz3zIQ
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之类的形象词。再比如: h9t$Uz^N
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room R{C(K(5/
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小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room }n]Ng]KM`
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room )X1{
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所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则 B{QBzx1L9c
1)加法(串联) \ ZgE
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, Gt\lFQ
但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: DwM)r7<Ex
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. /j#n
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Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. J4k=A7^N
其它的短语可以用: M,j U}yD3
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2)转折(拐弯抹角) iW)8j 8
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 mUNn%E:7@{
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The coat was thin, but it was warm. FI)17i$
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despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, hwPw]Ln/
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3)因果(so, so, so) xipU8'ac/
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
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The snow began to fall, so we went home. S-a]j;U
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4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) GF"hx`zyJ
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 1rNzJ;'
举例:This is what I can do. TtK[nP
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. #oS<E1
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When to go, Why he goes away… L 8c0lx}Nn
5)附加(多此一举) IDad9 Bx
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 vt/x
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The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. a]$1D!Anc
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. yjO1 Ol
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. -zCH**y%1
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or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 %Si6]3-^@
6)排比(排山倒海句) hnffz95
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! >>QY'1Eu
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as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean \J4L:.`qS
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to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) gK+4
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要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则 -r!. 9q
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! ~b(i&DVK
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: 9-sw!tKx
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如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! .7O*pJ2(H
文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例 SDL7<ZaE
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思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! WEAT01
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方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; W,D4.w$@'
世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through Nv$R\' 3
comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: u\a#{G;Z
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实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! B{/R: Hm
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. Moy <@+
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