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工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: r$?Vx_f`Q
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to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to TRCI\
satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite xx6S`R6:
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如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! hqWbp*
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 JQH7ZaN
主 题 句原则 t}c v2S
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! s%bUgO%&
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! ( w5f(4
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prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, Ba<#1p7_
you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、 @%%bRY
一 二 三原则 0hb/`[Q
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… `TkbF9N+
如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 }*Dd/'2+1
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗) %/X2 l
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗) ?|)rv
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗) 4^`PiRGt
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, @N]5&4NL
lastly(不推荐,原因:俗) s v6INe:
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
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6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐) QW,cn7
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐) Q^vGj</u
8)most important of all, moreover, finally H a90
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) 0}6QO
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) \?r$&K]4
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则 \I:UC
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写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: X1O65DMr`g
I cannot bear it. Ls lM$
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. d8D yv#gT
I want it. _d/GdeLs
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. j1W
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这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则 |G>q:]+AV
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, /j$$0F>s7
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之类的形象词。再比如: N'I?fWN!;R
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小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room Y"r
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所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则 [O.LUR;
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都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, ]kyle3#-~
但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: 6(\q< fx
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Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. -HO6K)ur
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The coat was thin, but it was warm. f'7d4
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3)因果(so, so, so) EZgxSQaPH
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! TWl(\<&+)
The snow began to fall, so we went home. EhmUX@k],
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4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) 8AC.2v?_
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 LZZ:P
举例:This is what I can do. ;r0|_mnf
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. RGx]DP$5G
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When to go, Why he goes away… 7Y_fF1-wY
5)附加(多此一举) ]%WD} 4e
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 R9|2&pfm(M
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. T9U2j-lA?
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. buxI-wv
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. :!Y?j{sGU
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or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 {Y
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6)排比(排山倒海句) b0zxT9
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! c],frhmyd
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to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) #ejw@bd
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则 5E oWyy
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! ~y-vKCp|
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: l_j<aCY?|
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China. 8HRPJSO~g
如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! v(Zi;?c
文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例 ^Mvsq)
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思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! >%p
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方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; 5 *pN<S
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comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: ;`PkmAg
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