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如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! Xvm.Un<N
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 Aj.TX%}`h
主 题 句原则 g>x2[//pk
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! u#?K/sU
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! B=#rp*vwL
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领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… tt,MO)8VD
如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 |uQJMf[L)
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9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) K7Kd{9-2
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) K5z*DYT
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则 li8l+5d q
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: ~d^+yR-
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I want it. Ku*@4#<L6h
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这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则 *TVr|
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4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) ~~a,Fyko2
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 bc=,$
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5)附加(多此一举) G2qv)7{l2
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 YbtsJ
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or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 ze2%#<
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文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! @~ k4,dJ
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既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! /tm2b<G
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: P5Lb)9_Jw
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实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! SRtw
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